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Chapter 10 — DANA OKORO

By Mavenlus Desk · 2026-08-29

The investigator came to the hospital on Saturday morning at ten.

Her name is Dana Okoro and she is with the county division of child protection and she has a laptop bag with a broken zip.

She sat in the chair by the window and she did not open the laptop for the first fifteen minutes.

Okoro: Mr. Vance, I want to tell you what this is and what it isn't, because people usually assume the worst version.

Mark: Okay.

Okoro: There's an open investigation. It concerns Sophia. It's not a criminal matter — that's the police, and there's a separate file open with them regarding your sister-in-law. Mine is about whether Sophia is safe in the home she's going back to.

Mark: She's safe with me.

Okoro: Probably. I'm going to check. That's the job.

She asked me about the six days. She asked in order, the way I have written it above, and when I got to Tuesday she stopped me.

Okoro: Your sister-in-law asked you on Tuesday to take her to a doctor.

Mark: Yes.

Okoro: And on Wednesday she asked you to keep Sophia out of the back hallway.

Mark: Yes.

Okoro: Do you know what's in the back hallway?

Mark: Their rooms. Sarah's and Lucas's.

Okoro: Mr. Vance, do you know anything about your nephew's medical history?

And I sat in that chair in my daughter's hospital room and I realised that I did not.

I had lived with that boy for three months and eleven days and I could not have told her the name of his doctor, his school, or one single thing about his health.

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